| Number | 173
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| Category | errata
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| Synopsis | misc typos
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| State | lrmdraft
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| Class | errata-simple
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| Arrival-Date | Oct 24 2002
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| Originator | Shalom Bresticker <Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com>
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| Release | 2001b: 1.4, 2.5.1, 3.1, 7.10.1, 7.10.2, passim
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--------------F444D7F013EBA77D326B194D Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit 1.4, Para. beginning "Clause 21": The title should end with colon. Next sentence should begin on same line. 2.5.1, Example 4: 2nd half of example uses straight tics instead of forward tics, total of 7 places. 3.1, end: double period instead of single period. General: Not all Clause titles are same font and size. For example, Clause 4 title is Helvetica 12pt (default). 5 and 6 are Arial 14pt. 7 is Helvetica 14pt. Note that Clause number at beginning of line is Helvetica 12pt. 7.10.1, last sentence: "pull 1" and "strong 0" (2 places) should be without spaces, and all in bold Times, as shown at beginning of 7.9. 7.10.2, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet: In "strength1" and "strength0", the "0" and "1" should be in Times font, not fixed font, as in bullets 3 and 4. -- Shalom Bresticker Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com Design & Reuse Methodology Tel: +972 9 9522268 Motorola Semiconductor Israel, Ltd. Fax: +972 9 9522890 POB 2208, Herzlia 46120, ISRAEL Cell: +972 50 441478 "The devil is in the details." --------------F444D7F013EBA77D326B194D Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit <!doctype html public "-//w3c//dtd html 4.0 transitional//en"> 1.4, Para. beginning "Clause 21": The title should end with colon. Next sentence should begin on same line. 2.5.1, Example 4: 2nd half of example uses straight tics instead of
3.1, end: double period instead of single period.
General: Not all Clause titles are same font and size. For example,
7.10.1, last sentence: "pull 1" and "strong 0" (2 places) should
7.10.2, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet: In "strength1" and "strength0",
-- Shalom Bresticker Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com Design & Reuse Methodology Tel: +972 9 9522268 Motorola Semiconductor Israel, Ltd. Fax: +972 9 9522890 POB 2208, Herzlia 46120, ISRAEL Cell: +972 50 441478 "The devil is in the details." --------------F444D7F013EBA77D326B194D-- |
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1. Section 1.4: Paragraph beginning "Clause 21": The title should end with colon. Next sentence should begin on same line. 2. Section 2.5.1: This piece of the proposal is covered by 116. 3. Section 3.1: End of paragraph. Change ".." to "." . 4. Section 7.10.1, last sentence: Change "pull 1" to "pull1". Change both occurrences of "strong 0" to "strong0" Change all three to bold Times, as shown at beginning of 7.9. (Note - the format of strength indications is inconsistent elsewhere as well.) 5, Section 7.10.2, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet: In "strength1" and "strength0", change the "0" and "1" to Times font, not fixed font, as in bullets 3 and 4. 6. Entire document: Change all Clause titles to Helvetica 14 point including the number. |
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